CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

I think her head should be more on the side leaning toward the viewer .If you squint you can barely see her face which i find it should be more of a secondary center of attention right now you got the chest and the belly highlighted with a much larger zone of highlight that not really where you want the eye to go i would say it doesn't help the storytelling i would argue. Always try to think in term of 1,2,3 where is your 3 brightest spot or where it your saturated color...You got light on the bottom do they help the story or do they distract from it .You can always move the candle and crystal where you want the light to be so it less of problem. But it seem to me like you gone for a triangle composition here so it would make sense to have those there.