CGMythology's Sketchbook

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Ok now that back of the chest look like it float.

They look to tan i would say but who wouldn't be tan at the beach hahah. You said you were going saturated i tried the reverse.The highlight are whiter in my version to make it look like there less in a desert(very yellow due to sand in the air)here the air quality is the best so i think it the right choose for the highlight.

Throw in the atmospheric perspective also on those mountain to help create some scale.I also thrown some on the top of the ship center pole.

To me the lighting right now look to artifical.For example look how the floor every shadow is to the left but on the character there a light hitting them almost from the right of the viewer.This kind of shadow on the floor would not exist according to that light scenario

I darken the fish scale section of the siren a bit of dark there i think help move the eye toward the face.You can also see i darken the crotch.

I also thrown a fair bit of the ground color into the other color of the character to harmonize the whole thing.

So yea i think most of what i would fix would be regarding light that seem to be thing that get under my nail the most.Because of how well the rest is already at.