02-19-2022, 04:59 AM
For the piece for ''the thing come out of the grass i think you have made the grass outline look a bit to even but that might work if it could be clear that is a dirt path or a road but the texture of the ground suggest it a very flat surface which make it look unnatural if it in the middle of nowhere nor does it make it look like one of the two suggestion i formulated.
The razor sharp drip of blood isn't very realistic there no splashing and there no indication of damage where the blood is coming out from.
The head design doesn't make alot of sense from a viewer stand point .It hard to get an idea how it would see it navigate it environnement.Not only that it I think the issue is mainly that this might feel a bit to alien without a android looking face(face are one of the first thing we connect to as human so mybe try to establish some kind of emotion on the face right now there a disconnect we don't really feel anything toward it.Imagine the visual impact you are missing i think you want to make it look like it suffering or that it look for help or maybe it face is all deform(i know it might be a big challenge it seem you took a easy approch for the head for some reason)
I would assume it would have a more humanoid head since it as clear humanoid arm.
For a stand point of the composition i think there alot of empty space that serve no real purpose but to dilute the subject matter. I think a nice triangle composition and reframing and streching to keep the more illustrative frame would help a little bit i crop out some of the empty space.(Not to happy with the strech one)But the square one look to much like a storyboard i feel.
(Sorry no real paint over)
The razor sharp drip of blood isn't very realistic there no splashing and there no indication of damage where the blood is coming out from.
The head design doesn't make alot of sense from a viewer stand point .It hard to get an idea how it would see it navigate it environnement.Not only that it I think the issue is mainly that this might feel a bit to alien without a android looking face(face are one of the first thing we connect to as human so mybe try to establish some kind of emotion on the face right now there a disconnect we don't really feel anything toward it.Imagine the visual impact you are missing i think you want to make it look like it suffering or that it look for help or maybe it face is all deform(i know it might be a big challenge it seem you took a easy approch for the head for some reason)
I would assume it would have a more humanoid head since it as clear humanoid arm.
For a stand point of the composition i think there alot of empty space that serve no real purpose but to dilute the subject matter. I think a nice triangle composition and reframing and streching to keep the more illustrative frame would help a little bit i crop out some of the empty space.(Not to happy with the strech one)But the square one look to much like a storyboard i feel.
(Sorry no real paint over)