CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

I think the before end picture had a very nice quality to it i feel like you still need to try to remember toward the end to apply restraint with the light i am kinda repeating myself on that point for a while but it because i believe everything is better with moderation and it create actual visual hierachy to try to limit the highlight.If you flood everything in light it not always going to work it might be great for angel but not so much otherwise i would say.Plus there no real need for this much yellow taint to everything since this isn't a scene that seem to be happening in a landscape with alot of sand particule.The vegetation suggest a temperate and clear air.

I just wanted to give you a little peek at how your piece look just before the point i am talking about.I feel like it already a great picture at that point.

My problem is when you start to lose the figure with the sky because both start to become to yellow.Just a note also since you are very upward angle there should be less atmospheric perspective i feel the more you look up the less you generally have the heat of the floor coming up and creating the atmospheric disturbance that create the atmospheric perspective in regard to heat blurring thing like on hot summer day.Also the hair have a strange etheral quality to them when i feel they should feel more powerful and play to her ''sex appeal''