04-06-2022, 11:22 PM
Don't miss the opportunity to create foreshorten with those weapon.For added depth.
For the axe i would say get rid of the double sided one it just doesn't look like a very good balanced weapon choose in the weight distribution aspect being hold by one hand right now nor does it invite a balance composition being such a big shape i would say if you want a double axe combo pick a smaller one like a throwing axe instead of the right one.
But what i really would like suggest to change is the perpendicular arm with the handle of the double sided axe.One other thing is the rivet aspect on each axe for me it doesn't work it to many repeated rounded shape and the shape are to organize and well crafted for the idea we generally associate with ork i think the look work for the armor because it not repeat across all the object and fit on the armor.One other reason why i see a favorable a change in those detail is that sometime it good to have symmetry to represent subsconcious order but for ork i really like to think more in term of asymmetry when designing thing .
The belt doesn't look finish yet i can see the right side but where the left side?
The reasoning as to why i change one axe to a sword was due to how the blade could help create the foreshorten that would create a bit of depth in that frontal heavy composition which can generally feel flat.For the hand and weapon on the left it could be kept in a pretty similar fashion but this time it would hold nothing but a fist full of rage in as if she about to take revenge on her foe.You will see why.
Also as a drew i erase and i stubble opon a small happy accident will erasing the left axe i saw what look like burnt particule flying throught the air that you might want to add for storytelling the background could be a small village in fire maybe it was destroy by the ork or something no need to go heavy on the detail just a suggestion with a bit of blur perhaps.Heavy smoke in the sky as the sun goes down.
I change her hair to be a little less organize and clean cut (not very ork like to me)
I also change the armor to be less like the one you did in the past and i challenge you do draw some fur instead.
As for the wrapping on the arm and the weapon try to add a bit of thickness for the leather if it not all medical wrap it shouldn't be paper thin and she show some thickness.
For the axe i would say get rid of the double sided one it just doesn't look like a very good balanced weapon choose in the weight distribution aspect being hold by one hand right now nor does it invite a balance composition being such a big shape i would say if you want a double axe combo pick a smaller one like a throwing axe instead of the right one.
But what i really would like suggest to change is the perpendicular arm with the handle of the double sided axe.One other thing is the rivet aspect on each axe for me it doesn't work it to many repeated rounded shape and the shape are to organize and well crafted for the idea we generally associate with ork i think the look work for the armor because it not repeat across all the object and fit on the armor.One other reason why i see a favorable a change in those detail is that sometime it good to have symmetry to represent subsconcious order but for ork i really like to think more in term of asymmetry when designing thing .
The belt doesn't look finish yet i can see the right side but where the left side?
The reasoning as to why i change one axe to a sword was due to how the blade could help create the foreshorten that would create a bit of depth in that frontal heavy composition which can generally feel flat.For the hand and weapon on the left it could be kept in a pretty similar fashion but this time it would hold nothing but a fist full of rage in as if she about to take revenge on her foe.You will see why.
Also as a drew i erase and i stubble opon a small happy accident will erasing the left axe i saw what look like burnt particule flying throught the air that you might want to add for storytelling the background could be a small village in fire maybe it was destroy by the ork or something no need to go heavy on the detail just a suggestion with a bit of blur perhaps.Heavy smoke in the sky as the sun goes down.
I change her hair to be a little less organize and clean cut (not very ork like to me)
I also change the armor to be less like the one you did in the past and i challenge you do draw some fur instead.
As for the wrapping on the arm and the weapon try to add a bit of thickness for the leather if it not all medical wrap it shouldn't be paper thin and she show some thickness.