Vandrake's sketchbook

[darktiste]

I recommend you to keep working on observing value.You got a good range of those darker tone but you need more lighter tone on the cheek,nose and forehead for example.

For proportion you gave him a longer face but it still pretty great in term of level of detail you manage to catch.

To reduce proportion issue try to slow down and take your time and remember to alternate between observation, questioning and drawing.

Also congratulation on doing studies to balance the personal project.