07-15-2022, 12:47 PM
The pose on the archer is much improved although the foreshortening could be pushed a bit more it’s looks good. My current problem is the the bow and arrow itself. The arrowhead appears to not be centered on the shaft, the bow string being a solid black line could maybe benefit to just be a subtle line highlighted only by the light from the arrowhead to make it blend a bit more, but just personal choice. Also the the flights on the arrow don’t appear to be there, or atleast not the same as the arrows in the quiver, and the last thing would be where the hand is clutching the back of the arrow feels like it should be more interlocked with the fingers and not out by the knuckles but maybe I’m just seeing it wrong.
That being said the piece looks nice! I like the clean armor on the main character and the arrow light kissing all the characters is cool. Great work keep it up!
That being said the piece looks nice! I like the clean armor on the main character and the arrow light kissing all the characters is cool. Great work keep it up!