CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

I think you need to simplify the rock in foreground or at least try to get better shape that help.You have alot of small object allign in space here it make sense since it stair but graphically is not helping the flow because it horizontal detail repeating you want the repeating element to have a flow in depth. The rock on the stair the bigger one i would get rid off it just look out of place. If you really want to put detail in the stair you could do more with less by using blade of grass instead it would be less plane heavy and time consuming i would say.Plus the blade can be good to create the flow that was missing.

But personally i think you would save time by just overall learning to put less detail but use color change to still keep it interesting where the image need to ''breathy'' this way you avoid the stylize very uniform color.An other thing would be what going on with the color around the subject you should have earthy tone brown and green for the reflective light since they are inside the forest but it should be subtile since the light is block mostly by the tree top.A blue rim light coming from the back probably since it make sense because of the background opening behind them.

I don't think the hole in the wing are necessary they add a bit of confusion to me at first so i think i would say try to instead of clumping them spread them a bit more across the wing.

I added this poor paint over just to show a bit of where it can go.