08-16-2022, 05:52 AM
''I love the jean of the future ''... gotta be a bit more creative i think if you are going for full futuristic but you throw in a element that seem out of the era.Meaning that even those i said post apo mix two era you gotta try to put in element that can survive the catasrophy(they might have survive that not for me to decide)I just think that someone who look like he as the mean to be equip with the best equipment probably wouldn't wear pant in a wars zone he would be wearing something a bit more appropriate.This remind me of the equivalent of women armor in video game.It cool but it doesn't make a lot of sense.Find the balance.
One thing that doesn't work for me also is i would say is that you should be thinking more about how they use those weapon and how they transport them.Right now he doesn't have a pistol hostler nor does he as a gun strap for the heavy minigun which seem to make sense to have.Just detail i think help make them feel more functional that help also the viewer relate because those thing exist in were timeline.
One thing i don't like is how flat the stuff he is sitting on look that to much of a separation in my opinion in value and saturation(i fix that in the pov*).
Also the pose look unbalance in term of weight distribution.Might be good to keep pushing gesture study.
1.Here a few thing i tried i darken the overal scene
2.I put some smoke in the foreground to harmonize the subject with it environnment and to decrease noise at the bottom of the piece.
3.I desaturated and ajusted the contrast to reflect how i see the light scenario work in such a smoky environnement.
Other than that you are without fault because you try to work those problem out most of the time.
One thing that doesn't work for me also is i would say is that you should be thinking more about how they use those weapon and how they transport them.Right now he doesn't have a pistol hostler nor does he as a gun strap for the heavy minigun which seem to make sense to have.Just detail i think help make them feel more functional that help also the viewer relate because those thing exist in were timeline.
One thing i don't like is how flat the stuff he is sitting on look that to much of a separation in my opinion in value and saturation(i fix that in the pov*).
Also the pose look unbalance in term of weight distribution.Might be good to keep pushing gesture study.
1.Here a few thing i tried i darken the overal scene
2.I put some smoke in the foreground to harmonize the subject with it environnment and to decrease noise at the bottom of the piece.
3.I desaturated and ajusted the contrast to reflect how i see the light scenario work in such a smoky environnement.
Other than that you are without fault because you try to work those problem out most of the time.