10-17-2022, 05:16 AM
Small tangente i would say with the end of the knife attach to the boot.
The boot look like her foot is going to explode i think a bit of reference would help.
I would expect some blood to spill a bit of the tips of the blade think of moving element in your piece i think that what missing(i give you that you got ship but they don't look very mobile they look like they are floating because they look bit like zepplin not very streamline which imply speed.
One other is changing the direction of some of those ship to create movement across the piece.Now they are all point in the same direction not sure it the best because to me it push my eye outside the composition.
The boot look like her foot is going to explode i think a bit of reference would help.
I would expect some blood to spill a bit of the tips of the blade think of moving element in your piece i think that what missing(i give you that you got ship but they don't look very mobile they look like they are floating because they look bit like zepplin not very streamline which imply speed.
One other is changing the direction of some of those ship to create movement across the piece.Now they are all point in the same direction not sure it the best because to me it push my eye outside the composition.