CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

Here a few additional point that seem to repeat in my critic.

The grass is to high detail it should become a bit suggestive as it move back in space in my opinion.Studying Vegetation are a great way to learn how to simplify detail.Just look at Ai work and you will see how little it necessary to suggest and for the brain to fill the rest of a picture.Also there some transparent grass on the left near the river bank.

You don't properly indicate value change for example where is the light coming from for us to see so much of is right under thigh.One other thing you ignore or often forget to create is occulusion shadow.

I circled the under arm because to me this space should be simplified to be fully in shadow.There is nothing to look at there so no need to create contrast over there i would say.

For the hand just adding the occulusion shadow between the finger would also go a long way.

For the last point i would say the costume look nice but it kinda hard to understand what i am looking at for the cloth in between the leg the shape of the fabric is torn it seem but i think i would just redefine the silhouette to make it less torn it not working on the first look i would say.