CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

Something doesn't seem right about the perspective in the top left corner not all line seem to be converging to the same vanishing point.

One other thing is how her elbow look.That doesn't make sense to have it with such a straight angle when the arm is going back in space.The straighter something is the more support it mean there is... but since the head is shifted to the left the weight isn't so much on the right arm.

One last thing i would say and recommend is to study more archtecture what you draw seem to end up very blocky but i suppose it as to do with how much you love castle.It up to you to see if that resonate with what you see and feel.

For the balcony shapes i thing there a few issue on the upper part of the repeating column the volume is hard to read so throwing in some value will probably help solve the volume that might have not been to sucessfully render during the lineart stage.I don't think you necessarly want that line going down the midsection and the bottom of those collumn but i see why they would be helpful ''to feel the volume''

Other then that keep up the great work.