Darktiste Sketchbook

[darktiste]

Hey darktiste, I must say Im pretty impressed by your ideas. Reading through the descriptions of hammers I almost had an illustration in mind for each of them. The portable sun might be my favorite. Silhouette presentation is definitely better on lighter background and your colors could have a little more harmony and thought put into them, it feels a little sloppy to me. But they sure look different, unique and distinguishable. A little note on the pouches, I like them a lot, but Im pretty sure they feel flat because the knot designs dont follow the perspective. Warp tool isnt going to save you here so you gotta do it the right way and draw it in perspective or shade it and make the designs disappear in shadow on the edges so you dont see it. Being fast and efficient seems to be a priority to you but it shows in your work and Im not sure its worth going for speed over quality. Hope to see more and get to know you more. For now, happy holidays to you!

Thank for the feed back as far as color i am not sure what you would suggest i do more i was already going for harmony to a certain extent since those are variation on a angelic hammer.

For the little bag the error i made was to create something that as volume rather what i am more focus on which is design i should have kept them almost like a flat bag.

The two last work are more intermediary work which is to say they are intended to be rather simple to save time and lock on the design of a ''fictious client'' so normally after this stage i would add the perspective that why there wan't really perspective bake into them since they are more orthographic but i fail since in a orthographic even ellipse would look flat.So those bag are not true orthographic and that why i feel it was not well excuted.

Well i certainly want to have interesting design it serve me nothing to rush but at the same time i am trying to figure out how much rendering seem resonable for each since it mock up project it can be forever so i have to imagine somewhat of a deadline which i would like to make more concrete than just think oh i gotta rush... setting a deadline is nice but sometime you realize how little you understand about how certain thing take time so it certainly something i have to get more in touch if i want to work at a professional level.