12-27-2022, 06:13 PM
C for me.Due to the moon pendant it just how i think when choosing color i see something and it kinda evoke color.
I think something in the middle of the orb would be cool.I took a picture from the internet for the crystal ball so don't do that it was just to imagine what could be inside the ball.
The mirror wasn't so much of a good idea in retrospective but it can still work so here what i suggest. Adding some dust and spider web could be helpful to reduce you work load.This way if you don't feel like doing reflection you can spend your time elsewhere.
For the book i am not sure why it still blank at this stage but i would encourage you to add some text and maybe some magic symbol taking inspiration from magic grimoire of the medieval period.
There also a blank picture on the left which remind me of harry potter where there ghost hunting the picture which could add to the surnatual vibe i believe you are going for.
For the wall and book shelf you can maybe look for some gothic inspired decorative element but i feel like it already very busy so i see why it might not be welcome.
On the ''it very busy part'' i think removing some element on the right on the table still apply.It better to remove some now than later.I am thinking of element where you can't see the base those are the item i would remove.It essential gonna be a time saver and less is more sometime.
Oh and before i forget the potion on the left we should see more of the top of the lips of the bottle.The ellipse is way to front facing compare to the ellipse on the candle just by it side.Also i gotta point at a small tagente with the book on the second higest shelf and the side of the canva.(use your own pic mine is very hard to pic on what i am trying to show because i applied color to the line)
Lastly i did a few thing in term of color to break the repetitive color here how i did i took an other color for the eye which suggest there eye are magical and that there is a magical bound between them.Since they don't take the emitted color of the ball.I also choose a color i find to be very witchy and add a gradation i think the color help erase some of the back element will still participating in the overall feeeling this done by applying as i said before color into the lineart so if you have that on a layer it can be done easly.
The red dot are some of the element i mention.Sorry for the long critic and some element i am hammering on.
The second color less image is about wrapping mostly i didn't do the candle ellipse not to give you all the ''answers'' but it mostly the leather and the ring that could get improve.I also added a few red line to give her a more thin to the bone look which help to age character.
I wish you a happy new years.
I think something in the middle of the orb would be cool.I took a picture from the internet for the crystal ball so don't do that it was just to imagine what could be inside the ball.
The mirror wasn't so much of a good idea in retrospective but it can still work so here what i suggest. Adding some dust and spider web could be helpful to reduce you work load.This way if you don't feel like doing reflection you can spend your time elsewhere.
For the book i am not sure why it still blank at this stage but i would encourage you to add some text and maybe some magic symbol taking inspiration from magic grimoire of the medieval period.
There also a blank picture on the left which remind me of harry potter where there ghost hunting the picture which could add to the surnatual vibe i believe you are going for.
For the wall and book shelf you can maybe look for some gothic inspired decorative element but i feel like it already very busy so i see why it might not be welcome.
On the ''it very busy part'' i think removing some element on the right on the table still apply.It better to remove some now than later.I am thinking of element where you can't see the base those are the item i would remove.It essential gonna be a time saver and less is more sometime.
Oh and before i forget the potion on the left we should see more of the top of the lips of the bottle.The ellipse is way to front facing compare to the ellipse on the candle just by it side.Also i gotta point at a small tagente with the book on the second higest shelf and the side of the canva.(use your own pic mine is very hard to pic on what i am trying to show because i applied color to the line)
Lastly i did a few thing in term of color to break the repetitive color here how i did i took an other color for the eye which suggest there eye are magical and that there is a magical bound between them.Since they don't take the emitted color of the ball.I also choose a color i find to be very witchy and add a gradation i think the color help erase some of the back element will still participating in the overall feeeling this done by applying as i said before color into the lineart so if you have that on a layer it can be done easly.
The red dot are some of the element i mention.Sorry for the long critic and some element i am hammering on.
The second color less image is about wrapping mostly i didn't do the candle ellipse not to give you all the ''answers'' but it mostly the leather and the ring that could get improve.I also added a few red line to give her a more thin to the bone look which help to age character.
I wish you a happy new years.