01-03-2023, 01:26 AM
Sorry to add up since you seem ready to commit here a few other point.
The right leg need a bit of clean up and overlapping it not like it a chicken wing my PO was just to give a rought idea of the direction.
I feel like the beard could be rougher it to tame for a warrior fighting the element of nature.
For the crow i don't think the thunder aspect is working anymore in light of what you said but i got an other idea maybe doing white crow for a change would be nice.If not i would suggest switching for bird that are more common in mountain like condor or maybe eagle.
A little blizzard would also contribute to the whole story and add a bit of movement as if can feel rather static with the composition
And if you feel like taking the opportunity trying to paint snow it an additional skill you could go after.
One thing for the arm holding the axe i find that all the fur make it hard to feel like there a shoulder pad underneat which to me bring the question of mobility.Maybe instead of the fur on the shoulder maybe he could wear it as a cap instead it would give more importance to the shoulder that way which to me would also renforce the strenght aspect of the storytelling.
The right leg need a bit of clean up and overlapping it not like it a chicken wing my PO was just to give a rought idea of the direction.
I feel like the beard could be rougher it to tame for a warrior fighting the element of nature.
For the crow i don't think the thunder aspect is working anymore in light of what you said but i got an other idea maybe doing white crow for a change would be nice.If not i would suggest switching for bird that are more common in mountain like condor or maybe eagle.
A little blizzard would also contribute to the whole story and add a bit of movement as if can feel rather static with the composition
And if you feel like taking the opportunity trying to paint snow it an additional skill you could go after.
One thing for the arm holding the axe i find that all the fur make it hard to feel like there a shoulder pad underneat which to me bring the question of mobility.Maybe instead of the fur on the shoulder maybe he could wear it as a cap instead it would give more importance to the shoulder that way which to me would also renforce the strenght aspect of the storytelling.