CBinns coloring journey

[darktiste]

I think the story just doesn't work i have no idea what i am looking at if you don't tell me there isn't anything to really get hook into the piece.The way the anatomy is now i can't say if it a she/he? it kinda androgynous the muscle and physic look rather masculine even the face but than i can see boob so i am even more wondering what i am looking at is that a mustache?But than it get even weirder with the tail and paw i assume it two dfiferent being but so much information is under water and hidden with overlapping that it kinda hard to see where one thing start and where it end.Also i don't see why the character would wear the skull of what i assume is the same species as it riding it would be strange but that just my opinion.

I think it a perfect opportunity to realize how feed back can help before to much is commited.But i think you didn't really go into this piece with a story in mind it was just rendering something for the sake of rendering i feel correct me if i am wrong.