CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

I feel like c will work better once you add a rim highlight.I am not sure if it the moon behind him in that case why is there no line art like the rest of it?The moon would make more sense to be lighter than the character.To me B is to uniform in term of Bg and character.

One other thing i would have addressed if it wasn't for the small adjustment on the other piece is the foresorten (i am not a fan of straight foreshorten) because it can be confusing at first glance.Since the pose is pretty much establish i would say planning a secondary light to try to help the hand ready against is body will help establish it as a hand and arm.Maybe like a spot light come from down below as if the police as chasing him.What behind him could be the spotlight but in this case you would need a surface from where to cast a cast shadow.But i see that he is on a cheminney so it not to hard to change it to something else but still the back wall would be to close so even those i like the idea in pratice i doubt it be possible in the current state of the drawing so i say keeping going in your direction and ignore the cast shadow part it can still be a spot light from below and the moon from behind but try not to put light from the back and front but have if any secondary at an angle.