CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

When you use a secondary or even three light try to create a difference in intensity so that you can read each light as separate otherwise it look like the moon beam are coming from undearneath him .Also in the shadow i desatured the color.Also think about where there fog there more light shattering which mean less contrast and less light reach the surface.I also reduce the light intensity of the moon and add a bit of light to the lettering to make them the first read and than the rest as the scond read.

It would be very hard to find any difference at this stage but side by side you could see the difference it make in the shadow.

For the next piece kratos and the boy i think it the same issue as the other viking the axe head is out of allignment i am not doing at paint over for this one i want to see if you figure it out.

Also some of the form read as to flat i am thinking of the arm plate.It can't be this thin.Look at silhouette and look how it make a line from the plate to the elbow that just leak of proper wrapping and it wrong because it leak of thickness.Same for those belt around the arm.For this to happen they would have to be extremely thight and going in the flesh and this would create pinching in the skin.