03-18-2023, 12:41 PM
I would really advise you to take some time on the side to draw more hand holding object just because i mention it in the past and i am not sure here if the way she holding that dagger is plausible.I have the feeling is goes throught some of the volume of the hand but that just could be me...
Now for the roast and question session.
The dagger on he hips have a guard but the one in the hand doesn't.Why?The guard is only for decorative purpose???Also the upper dagger on the hips show a slight curvature on the handle part compare to the center line also something to note is that those dagger are paper thin they are wrapping around the leg i shouldn't have to remind you that object have volume unless they are seen at a perfect eye level at a 90 degre angle from the viewer point of observation such as in a orthographic sheet for modelling.As for the pant i am not sure how you go from pant to no pant toward the ankle where does it start and where does it end?For the hand on the right instead of 4 finger why not show 5 finger it look kinda strange just my personal opinion.I can't say i am a fan of the shape of the cloak maybe you could try something else but save a back up just in case if you want give a try at something bit more pleasing to the eye.What going on with the foot is that a sandal or what the ankle seem to suggest a bare ankle i am not sold as to what i am exactly looking at in this part.What going on with the size of those window square shape are those window or architectural feature?For the pant are you going for tissue or leather?
We all make mistake so i don't know why i am being so harsh on you.I guess i would expect those error not to be the same one i pointed in the past...but trust me if i didn't care i wouldn't bring this up again but i hope that maybe you can sometime remember some of my word and improve a little more each time so i hope you don't mind me breaking your back a little.Even if not everything stick the first time repeating is important and i should really stop saying that i hate repeating because here i am.
Now for the roast and question session.
The dagger on he hips have a guard but the one in the hand doesn't.Why?The guard is only for decorative purpose???Also the upper dagger on the hips show a slight curvature on the handle part compare to the center line also something to note is that those dagger are paper thin they are wrapping around the leg i shouldn't have to remind you that object have volume unless they are seen at a perfect eye level at a 90 degre angle from the viewer point of observation such as in a orthographic sheet for modelling.As for the pant i am not sure how you go from pant to no pant toward the ankle where does it start and where does it end?For the hand on the right instead of 4 finger why not show 5 finger it look kinda strange just my personal opinion.I can't say i am a fan of the shape of the cloak maybe you could try something else but save a back up just in case if you want give a try at something bit more pleasing to the eye.What going on with the foot is that a sandal or what the ankle seem to suggest a bare ankle i am not sold as to what i am exactly looking at in this part.What going on with the size of those window square shape are those window or architectural feature?For the pant are you going for tissue or leather?
We all make mistake so i don't know why i am being so harsh on you.I guess i would expect those error not to be the same one i pointed in the past...but trust me if i didn't care i wouldn't bring this up again but i hope that maybe you can sometime remember some of my word and improve a little more each time so i hope you don't mind me breaking your back a little.Even if not everything stick the first time repeating is important and i should really stop saying that i hate repeating because here i am.