CGMythology's Sketchbook

[Berebobe2]

Hey, I like your spiderman. Just have a few changes I'd make that I'd like to share with you if that's okay.

1. The foot was looking a bit balloony
2. The collarbones seem to be missing
3. There's a lot of bounce lighting that I'd add overall given that the rooftop would kick off quite a bit of light. (I suppose this could be considered a style choice of going more photo real since photography tends to crush shadows but in real life you'd see them filled in substantially given the environment)
4. The structure of the shoulder is also a bit balloony

Paint overs (they're links you can click on to make bigger. If anyone knows how to add attached images in a spoiler tag that'd be appreciated)











Other than that the anatomy is lovely and overall cool painting!