CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

What moment of the day is this taking place? It not mid day by the way the underside of the building turret is catching light.But when i look at the Highlight on the spherical object it get conflicted because the HL fall just a bit above the middle.

Honestly i think going away from a red cloak just harmonize the element just a little bit

Here i assumed something a little bit more over expose switch toward a more yellow light will keeping the blue in the shadow.

One thing i also did is add some blur on the wall leading to the furtest turret we don't need two tower to get the idea of what the other is we can fill the blank and it also help push the depth.

I have nothing of major importance to say on this piece maybe exept that i am not buying the metallic quality on those dome i think we should see more contrast in your dark on that material.Sadly my photoshop crash before i could have a jab at that...

There also a few place where you should see lost edge but you are fight against that by putting a line which is a struggle against lineart vs painting i think might just be something you do to keep element visually separate but end up removing at the end it not something i can tell since i didn't really observe this that much until now so that why i want to bring it up.

So for the small image the crash only allowed for a screencap.