05-03-2023, 05:32 AM
I think the PO give it more depth. I gotta say i am terrified so this how mermaid really look when they try to drown people?I would not want to be one of those unfortunate sailor.Talking about sailor why not try to add the head of one sailor under her open palm she would be drowning him
I think the fish make it a bit to friendly for such a nightmarish creature.I am not a fan of the coral either to me it evoke calmness.To me this feel more like she going toward the surface rather than running along the bed floor.It as if she want to grab us which mean we would be at the bottom which to me doesn't make sense it would make more sense that she coming from the depth.So that why to me the coral and the fish look bit out of place at least in my storytelling this would be contradictory.
Also planning the depth of where she underwater is important if you understand and want to apply the concept of color loose due to water refractiom. You can see more about what i am talking about here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AAJjdA6b...=emb_title
I think the fish make it a bit to friendly for such a nightmarish creature.I am not a fan of the coral either to me it evoke calmness.To me this feel more like she going toward the surface rather than running along the bed floor.It as if she want to grab us which mean we would be at the bottom which to me doesn't make sense it would make more sense that she coming from the depth.So that why to me the coral and the fish look bit out of place at least in my storytelling this would be contradictory.
Also planning the depth of where she underwater is important if you understand and want to apply the concept of color loose due to water refractiom. You can see more about what i am talking about here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AAJjdA6b...=emb_title