CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

Strangely you didn't add a color to those eye or the eyebrow which in one image would clash with the color of the facial tattoo.Where is this scene taking place that important to determine how tan or how pale she should be in term of skin color.

I am now a fan of the second blade ''energetic'' flow i think it wouldn't hurt to see the energy point back toward her head rather.It doesn't make much sense here since it wrapping around the blade on one and seem completely diconnected on the right.

For me colorwise i would say  A or B but i would go for colored hair just so you can make the face tattoo pop more .Try to think of not adding to much saturation to different element or else they fight for attention.A smilar tone of color as the cloth for the hair would probably harmonize thing a little more.

For the hand holding the blade i don't like foreshorten where we loose track of where thing connect as i said previous adding a bit of angle instead of just strict side way few of the arm help create a bit more depth.

Also in term of tangente the blade run pretty much parallel to the arm.

For the hand holding the blade i would add a bit more handle lenght she almost look like she holding the blade also a tangente there going from the brest into the ellipse of the handle could be fix with a more lenght also there...