05-27-2023, 08:20 PM
The tattoo on here face seem to create a clash in style with the rest of the piece.I suggest removing the countour line since this seem to be the element that create this style clash to let the eye pop a little more and remove some attention from the face also if it not some kind of magical tattoo a little less saturation would help make it feel more like a real tattoo.Also if you remove the countour it can become a magical tattoo if you choose to keep it saturated.
I feel like the leg is a bit to much dynamic i feel like i would rather have it seem as if she charging at us instead.
I feel like my color choose might be a bit repetitive but that allow for some harmony between some element which can serve to create a narrative between the element.
When you plot for where you want the attention to go try to avoid similar value else you don't create a hierachy of where to look at for example the breast was bit to highlighted which took away from the face which as all those great detail and the armor as already similar detail so no need to add more attention to the breast i think unless you want to make something a bit more erotic which doesn't seem to be what you were going for here.
I really like the level of dynamism it great but i feel like you need to try to have the character facing away from us more often to focus more on the storytelling aspect.
Would be interesting to see you with play with proportion like drawing from the perspective of someone on the shoulder of giant helping build a house for example or a sea monster taking on a ship seen from the perspective of the captain of a sea merchant i feel like it would make for epic storytelling exercise.Feel free to use any of those two idea if you feel that something you would want to experiement with.Else as always i am impatient to see what the future hold for you.
I feel like the leg is a bit to much dynamic i feel like i would rather have it seem as if she charging at us instead.
I feel like my color choose might be a bit repetitive but that allow for some harmony between some element which can serve to create a narrative between the element.
When you plot for where you want the attention to go try to avoid similar value else you don't create a hierachy of where to look at for example the breast was bit to highlighted which took away from the face which as all those great detail and the armor as already similar detail so no need to add more attention to the breast i think unless you want to make something a bit more erotic which doesn't seem to be what you were going for here.
I really like the level of dynamism it great but i feel like you need to try to have the character facing away from us more often to focus more on the storytelling aspect.
Would be interesting to see you with play with proportion like drawing from the perspective of someone on the shoulder of giant helping build a house for example or a sea monster taking on a ship seen from the perspective of the captain of a sea merchant i feel like it would make for epic storytelling exercise.Feel free to use any of those two idea if you feel that something you would want to experiement with.Else as always i am impatient to see what the future hold for you.