06-23-2023, 04:30 AM
It would be nice to see a bit more 3/4 view pose i feel like at this point you are looking to avoid doing similar thing but i mean if those piece are not to push yourself i understand if you prefer what you are comfortable with when you just need to relax for a change.But the problem is that between client work you gotta think that it probably more the time to experiment that in client project which is a more risky thing to do.So really in the grand scheme of thing there is little space for to much repetitiveness if you are unhappy with some of your fundamental.Obviously every decision can end up being a preference that help you develop a personal style so it as to be ''deliberate'' not just out of comfort
It weird that you don't take the time to add a color to eye it where the viewer look first that just how we are.
I think a side lighting would be ideal if what she about to do is betray someone else if she about to idk use that blade for a blood sacrifice let say i think a more back light and light from the bottom light would be interesting.
Personally prefer D it the one that would fit those idea i am sharing.
Btw the hand look good but the left arm upper part seem to be inexistent we can see the shape suggested by the cloth but it look a bit odd that it doesn't seem to connect to the torso also this make the other arm look unusually long did you draw the body before drawing the cloth? If not maybe just make sure thing make sense under there before deciding on cloth.Also her elbow should affect how the cloth goes down it should fall down directly where it fall of the arm a cape open up like you did because it drag across the floor that why it open up like that i say that because i just don't know i am not the one who understand what going on outside the frame so something it hard to give critic when there thing out of frame affecting the scene.
A detail you could add to make your hand a just a bit next level is the little wrinkle where the finger bend.
Also a comment on line weight is to think about the light direction have thinner line where the light is hitting and bold line in the shadow side this can help the form less flat if you make your line art to even it can contribute to the overall thing look flat even if you have different line size.
It weird that you don't take the time to add a color to eye it where the viewer look first that just how we are.
I think a side lighting would be ideal if what she about to do is betray someone else if she about to idk use that blade for a blood sacrifice let say i think a more back light and light from the bottom light would be interesting.
Personally prefer D it the one that would fit those idea i am sharing.
Btw the hand look good but the left arm upper part seem to be inexistent we can see the shape suggested by the cloth but it look a bit odd that it doesn't seem to connect to the torso also this make the other arm look unusually long did you draw the body before drawing the cloth? If not maybe just make sure thing make sense under there before deciding on cloth.Also her elbow should affect how the cloth goes down it should fall down directly where it fall of the arm a cape open up like you did because it drag across the floor that why it open up like that i say that because i just don't know i am not the one who understand what going on outside the frame so something it hard to give critic when there thing out of frame affecting the scene.
A detail you could add to make your hand a just a bit next level is the little wrinkle where the finger bend.
Also a comment on line weight is to think about the light direction have thinner line where the light is hitting and bold line in the shadow side this can help the form less flat if you make your line art to even it can contribute to the overall thing look flat even if you have different line size.