07-08-2023, 12:41 PM
I think i would tone down a bit of the lightning just to harmonize and not make it so staged.Also the lighting is very strange... why is light coming from the side if the sky imply a sunset or dusk... keep in mind this IS not a interior scene it doesn't let you cheat light as much as an interior scene would i can accept the excuse of two sun but without context it a bit hard to shallow.
For the rock i think you should have add more contrast between the light side and dark side it read flat.I think it also as something to do with the texture overidding the form in my opinio.Just look back at your progress timelapse and you can see how the form get progressively flatten by the effect.
I think the skin look nice but that look to flawless like a doll skin soft and a bit to shiny try to add imperfection scar and maybe a bit of touch of virility on the chest and arm of that guy.For the lady some beauty mark perhaps.
For the rock i think you should have add more contrast between the light side and dark side it read flat.I think it also as something to do with the texture overidding the form in my opinio.Just look back at your progress timelapse and you can see how the form get progressively flatten by the effect.
I think the skin look nice but that look to flawless like a doll skin soft and a bit to shiny try to add imperfection scar and maybe a bit of touch of virility on the chest and arm of that guy.For the lady some beauty mark perhaps.