CGMythology's Sketchbook

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So here a few thing that was POV .Some blur effect for the foreground which is only really a repetition of what in the background as already more information and fill the visual formation for the viewer.Remove the detail of the window and darken the foreground so it not so light.You got already a have a contrast with the hand moving up toward the face(the hand is kinda weak if you want to use it as your entering point i would have a little more foreshorten there but the frame of the building help move the eye so it a great place to have the hand.Remember you can also create contrast with proportion big shape vs smalll shape that something comic us alot for dynamism.On some other note i try to dark a bit of the right bottom corner to bring some attention as to why there smoke i felt the hint of orange wasn't enough it hadd to be contrast a little more in term of value.I also adjusted the hue of the red to be more like the comic reference.

Hope you enjoy and feel inspired by a few of the change and feedback.