08-04-2023, 05:08 AM
The size of that shield i think is taking to much space also i don't really see why it would be there other then to fill space and help direct the eye.If that axe is so massive why a shield it certainly not her shield... as for the element trying to blend them with the environment specially in snow scene is important the overlap where they touch the ground that where you want to break the normal silhouette of the shape to imply snow.(Take note it not included in the pov due to the crash)
Btw sorry i had to upload two image because my photoshop crash during the POV the reason for the 2 image is that one is to explain where i believe you want your point of interest to fall do you see the middle square at each corner you have the opportunity to put a point of interest.
The red line on the shield is to indicate that you have the opportunity to allign with this direction to create some direction toward the feet so the eye move down the leg and keep moving throught the other rhythm your radial element i am refering to as to what should allign to creat the sense of direction.Btw very good rhythm in here i would say.
Also an other thing is that i change the place of the skull to be instead on one of the four corner of the square that sit at the middele of the grind.(Might be added confusion but it create a nice overlap that you won't get as much if you place the object and they seem to just sit side by side which i feel it does in the original.
I suggest cropping a bit to achieve this result otherwise the point of interest fall away from where you want them to be.
Also the foot ideally should not touch the frame if you decide to go in the suggested cropped direction so if you can move it up a little that would also be better.
As for the color test i would take the color of B for the tree and go with the color of the background of C in the forest part.
Btw sorry i had to upload two image because my photoshop crash during the POV the reason for the 2 image is that one is to explain where i believe you want your point of interest to fall do you see the middle square at each corner you have the opportunity to put a point of interest.
The red line on the shield is to indicate that you have the opportunity to allign with this direction to create some direction toward the feet so the eye move down the leg and keep moving throught the other rhythm your radial element i am refering to as to what should allign to creat the sense of direction.Btw very good rhythm in here i would say.
Also an other thing is that i change the place of the skull to be instead on one of the four corner of the square that sit at the middele of the grind.(Might be added confusion but it create a nice overlap that you won't get as much if you place the object and they seem to just sit side by side which i feel it does in the original.
I suggest cropping a bit to achieve this result otherwise the point of interest fall away from where you want them to be.
Also the foot ideally should not touch the frame if you decide to go in the suggested cropped direction so if you can move it up a little that would also be better.
As for the color test i would take the color of B for the tree and go with the color of the background of C in the forest part.