CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

I would keep working on the feet they don't feel like they help her keep her balance.There also some tangente issue for example the arm on the right side create a tangente with the fold in the cloth.The ear and the bottom of her hat run parallel.There more...of that issue but you ge the idea...

You didn't give a thickness to the armor and they don't wrap around because of that.

For the wing i think the finger toward the outside thin out to much where it meet the other finger.The strap between the neck and shoulder that old her armor shouldn't be arcing as much is should be more flat toward the top of the arc specially on people without skinny people but it seem it would make a tangente one again there with the wing.There is zero indication of her shoulder muscle overlapping the torso going toward the trap muscle of the neck

For the color I like B and F.

One thing concerning your choose of color for the cloth the red color is kinda clashing in clarity toward the right wrist because it overlapping an other section of red so it confusing to understand if that cloth or if it part of the armor.Also the red hair with the red element of the hat  that to me that just to much red.Revising the color to add clarity and having in mind that you have some overlap should help solve the leak of color clarirty.

Lastly the mortal kombat symbol also need to follow the slent of the pyramid i think it also kinda small but that up to you.

Don't rush those are some of the stuff that have already been touch on in my critic in the past you can always make a checklist of ''common pitfall you make'' like for example let check tangente or let check if my object wrap around my figure.I am gonna give you a break this one is pretty complex regarding tangente that understandable they can be tricky to catch but i think at this point there no excuse for giving no thickness to armor.

Sorry the POV is very minimal and small i had to restart over once i start to notice the color problem will doing the POV i move my POV from the greyscale to the color test so it not very clear regarding what as been adjusted.

Also due to some carpal tunnel issue i am currently having i did not fix as much as i could have so some element mention are not address in the POV.