10-07-2023, 09:30 AM
I am very bad at anatomy but i still have eye to tell you that the face of that girl need to conform to the form of he skull her face is way to flat at the moment.Also the way you drawn the breast down instead of showing the proper torsion is an issue the breast would go up because her shoulder is up due the ''cracking up of the ''smash'' or ''slicing'' to get momentum.
One thing i like is the mysterious 4 figure in the back but this guy is living in a totally different perspective then the rest i gotta say i know you are going strong in the dramatic composition but keep in mind the rule of perspective if you don't want to throw the viewer in the fourth dimention.Like it would make sense if we would see the character emerging from a portal in that case maybe the perspective inside that plane is different from the one of this reality.
One thing i like is the mysterious 4 figure in the back but this guy is living in a totally different perspective then the rest i gotta say i know you are going strong in the dramatic composition but keep in mind the rule of perspective if you don't want to throw the viewer in the fourth dimention.Like it would make sense if we would see the character emerging from a portal in that case maybe the perspective inside that plane is different from the one of this reality.