11-12-2023, 06:37 AM
The feet of the men are a bit to flat compare to the relative angle i suspect the slope to be .The women pose seem unresolved.
The repeating element on the side have no overlap so they look very '' flat in space.The men furthest knee look much lower then it should be since it a little higher then the front foot.The women hand as to much shortcut foreshorten and even as tangente on the furthest hand where two finger overlap.
What will be the challenge is to recognize how to adjust the gesture to properly represent the angled nature of the surface they rest on and the camera angle being so low is also a challenge because it push thing to more dramatic angle.
One thing i noted is how long the neck is so i try to shorten it to see what would happen.
Here a very sloppy POV i had to cut it short... here what the pov was trying to solve it was mostly about the women pose.Her feet is pointed so that her feet and the one of the men don't occupy the same space and the arm mirroring the leg help put some weight foward to keep the center of gravity balance.
I feel that they feel more connected then before before i feel like they were to equal in importance before.The space between them is more pleasing to the eye now and let the eye rest because the left character is very detail heavy so her bare leg offer a nice rest to move toward her shoulder and toward detail once again.
The repeating element on the side have no overlap so they look very '' flat in space.The men furthest knee look much lower then it should be since it a little higher then the front foot.The women hand as to much shortcut foreshorten and even as tangente on the furthest hand where two finger overlap.
What will be the challenge is to recognize how to adjust the gesture to properly represent the angled nature of the surface they rest on and the camera angle being so low is also a challenge because it push thing to more dramatic angle.
One thing i noted is how long the neck is so i try to shorten it to see what would happen.
Here a very sloppy POV i had to cut it short... here what the pov was trying to solve it was mostly about the women pose.Her feet is pointed so that her feet and the one of the men don't occupy the same space and the arm mirroring the leg help put some weight foward to keep the center of gravity balance.
I feel that they feel more connected then before before i feel like they were to equal in importance before.The space between them is more pleasing to the eye now and let the eye rest because the left character is very detail heavy so her bare leg offer a nice rest to move toward her shoulder and toward detail once again.