11-30-2023, 02:19 AM
What is the flaking all about is it suppose to be paint or moss?This piece like a nice opportunity to work on edge control and soft gradiant.
You should give those feather some volume and don't indicate the roundness of the wing as a edge(if you want to mark a area of shadow you can use a dotted line as a reminder and smudge it later on)
One problem i see is the shape of her right arm it getting deform as it hit the other volume it not cloth it could squish somewhat if press onto something but it rest over rather .Also if you compare the angle of the outside of that arm it are not really at a similar angle as the reference
The elbow is lower on the left but it pretty even in the reference so that mean also that the left arm is not following the reference correctly.
I am saying this with having in mind that this is heavly inspired by the reference almost a study rather then a attempt to make it your own.
You should give those feather some volume and don't indicate the roundness of the wing as a edge(if you want to mark a area of shadow you can use a dotted line as a reminder and smudge it later on)
One problem i see is the shape of her right arm it getting deform as it hit the other volume it not cloth it could squish somewhat if press onto something but it rest over rather .Also if you compare the angle of the outside of that arm it are not really at a similar angle as the reference
The elbow is lower on the left but it pretty even in the reference so that mean also that the left arm is not following the reference correctly.
I am saying this with having in mind that this is heavly inspired by the reference almost a study rather then a attempt to make it your own.