CGMythology's Sketchbook

[darktiste]

Yeah i think you made the palm a bit to smooth they look like there are almost inflated.Also you make the underside of the finger to rounded and you simplify the outline to the point where the hand doesn't feel as bony as it probably should.


The reference is kinda fuzzy so i don't blame you on that it harder to read contour because of that.Try to draw over the reference and try to study the roundness of the finger first once you are done put the reference at a low opacity over your artwork and see how much they match.The idea of drawing over the reference is to get a better idea of the shape to clarify it and using the refence over your work allow you to fast track the correction process or you can try to do it by observation which i would recommend since you are not on a deadline.

Also remember to put the occlusion shadow where finger touch and think of where the light bounce when to object are very close.Also for the hand don't add ''texture'' like pore the hand texture is different then the texture of the skin the hand as more fold and it should be that way for extra level of realism.

You can and probably should add nail to those finger.