03-14-2024, 08:57 PM
The way you made the death line up make them look as if they are going down some step it kinda weird I find that putting object in the foreground tend to flatten the overall piece and since they are side by side that amplify the visual focus it something i cant really put my finger on to explain.The angle of the shield reinforce the flatness due to it almost being perfectly circular.The sail in the background also play into that flat effect.I think it far past any constructive critism at this stage.Just observation i guess...
This one is certain hard due to the unique format that is a verticale composition.Not only that you probably had to include many figure in this already cramp space which create just general hard to read composition and silhouette.The many light source is also pushing this piece to absurd level of difficulty.Also light tend to flatten the form when there many light source but here you ignore some of the light source and it a problem because something just doesnt feel right.
I hope you had fun because for me this look like a nightmare commission to pull out.
This one is certain hard due to the unique format that is a verticale composition.Not only that you probably had to include many figure in this already cramp space which create just general hard to read composition and silhouette.The many light source is also pushing this piece to absurd level of difficulty.Also light tend to flatten the form when there many light source but here you ignore some of the light source and it a problem because something just doesnt feel right.
I hope you had fun because for me this look like a nightmare commission to pull out.