03-19-2024, 10:00 AM
Bonjour it me again
You don't seem to have any concept so far how how much the angle of an object related to the light source affect the shadow value.It very common we only tend to understand light on cylinder somehow...basically what i am saying is light is a gradient is not a solid united value.So what i suggest is to avoid graphite for now and get some marker which can build up value and to remember to work in pass to darker the color.Else what i suggest is not to use the point of the pencil to do hatch but to use the side tips of the pencil to create value. Hatching is a complex way to approch learning about value and light and shadow.
Also in perspective there is a concept call the cone of vision basically it cause distortion.To put it simply the closer you put your perpective point closer to each other the more distortion you cause.The general advise is to be able to imagine the vanishing point to be outside your piece of paper yeah it know it already asking alot when you are already try to estimate them on the page.Just make sure they are atleast at the edge on each side of the paper if you are not ready yet to try to visualize them outside the page.One trick that help sometime do complex drawing is to learn to draw grid this can help deal with the problem of vanishing point being outside the page they help guide the eye.I don't recommend it for traditional drawing but it fine for painting as you will hide the ''construction under a layer of paint but you will slowly loose the grid which is a down side sometime.You can do grid in second in digital medium aslong as you know some digital magic.
Congratulation on taking up the challenge.One thing you need to be more careful about is your vertical line they have slight angle or maybe it the way you took the picture that cause that impression.It why it kinda hard to properly give justice to whatever you do tradionally because you have to be mindful of the way it presented the page should allign with the border of the picture if you see what i mean.Also please try to properly maintain and store your drawing so they don't get deform or bent.
You should get the book you can watch a review here:https://www.google.com/search?client=opera&hs=Gvl&sca_esv=5471e4d8c457d32d&sxsrf=ACQVn099fHRyuDtaDoeeYgmQ0sg5AcWnTA:1710806106393&q=how+to+draw+for+fun+loomis&tbm=isch&source=lnms&prmd=ivsnbmtz&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjr6YCygf-EAxU7vokEHQPTCTcQ0pQJegQIFxAB&biw=950&bih=919&dpr=1#imgrc=eeNW6NDPvoFARM
You don't seem to have any concept so far how how much the angle of an object related to the light source affect the shadow value.It very common we only tend to understand light on cylinder somehow...basically what i am saying is light is a gradient is not a solid united value.So what i suggest is to avoid graphite for now and get some marker which can build up value and to remember to work in pass to darker the color.Else what i suggest is not to use the point of the pencil to do hatch but to use the side tips of the pencil to create value. Hatching is a complex way to approch learning about value and light and shadow.
Also in perspective there is a concept call the cone of vision basically it cause distortion.To put it simply the closer you put your perpective point closer to each other the more distortion you cause.The general advise is to be able to imagine the vanishing point to be outside your piece of paper yeah it know it already asking alot when you are already try to estimate them on the page.Just make sure they are atleast at the edge on each side of the paper if you are not ready yet to try to visualize them outside the page.One trick that help sometime do complex drawing is to learn to draw grid this can help deal with the problem of vanishing point being outside the page they help guide the eye.I don't recommend it for traditional drawing but it fine for painting as you will hide the ''construction under a layer of paint but you will slowly loose the grid which is a down side sometime.You can do grid in second in digital medium aslong as you know some digital magic.
Congratulation on taking up the challenge.One thing you need to be more careful about is your vertical line they have slight angle or maybe it the way you took the picture that cause that impression.It why it kinda hard to properly give justice to whatever you do tradionally because you have to be mindful of the way it presented the page should allign with the border of the picture if you see what i mean.Also please try to properly maintain and store your drawing so they don't get deform or bent.
You should get the book you can watch a review here:https://www.google.com/search?client=opera&hs=Gvl&sca_esv=5471e4d8c457d32d&sxsrf=ACQVn099fHRyuDtaDoeeYgmQ0sg5AcWnTA:1710806106393&q=how+to+draw+for+fun+loomis&tbm=isch&source=lnms&prmd=ivsnbmtz&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjr6YCygf-EAxU7vokEHQPTCTcQ0pQJegQIFxAB&biw=950&bih=919&dpr=1#imgrc=eeNW6NDPvoFARM