05-22-2024, 04:28 AM
Try to respect the scale of object as they are in the reference or make the reference to suit the size you want.It easier to critic your work when thing are at a 1 / 1 ratio.
The low eye lid is significantly different in shape you can notice the wrinkle and the color of the eye lid specially of on the left side is to red also. The color that radiate from the middle of the eye toward the outside goes more toward the edge.
Also you could have tried to add the reflection found in the eye made by the eye leashes but i give you that they are not really noticeable unless you zoom in and look at the micro detail.
The shape of the eye lid lips toward the left is to thic and curvy.Will the top eye lid toward the left is larger and less aggressive in it curvature when it should be.The shape is closer to an oval that was flatten at it top you made the curve like the shape of a symbolic eye.
You made the eye a bit like 3% to open when it look more relaxed.That one is just me over analyzing haha =P.
The low eye lid is significantly different in shape you can notice the wrinkle and the color of the eye lid specially of on the left side is to red also. The color that radiate from the middle of the eye toward the outside goes more toward the edge.
Also you could have tried to add the reflection found in the eye made by the eye leashes but i give you that they are not really noticeable unless you zoom in and look at the micro detail.
The shape of the eye lid lips toward the left is to thic and curvy.Will the top eye lid toward the left is larger and less aggressive in it curvature when it should be.The shape is closer to an oval that was flatten at it top you made the curve like the shape of a symbolic eye.
You made the eye a bit like 3% to open when it look more relaxed.That one is just me over analyzing haha =P.