05-23-2025, 07:17 AM
The right pillar is out of perspective(near the window) if you compare it to the ledge it sit on. I would also define what inside those window how much light is coming from them will be important i think as i don't see much other point for light source right now.
I am not an illustrator but for me when i try to put myself in your shoe i am like ''light is top priority''. Light is value it where the eye goes first. This scene appear to be a interior scene i am like where i am going to have artificial or natural light source and how can i use them to direct the attention to my focal point.
Are you going to make that ground symbol emit light? I think that would be a nice idea since below light is often sinister looking.
I am not an illustrator but for me when i try to put myself in your shoe i am like ''light is top priority''. Light is value it where the eye goes first. This scene appear to be a interior scene i am like where i am going to have artificial or natural light source and how can i use them to direct the attention to my focal point.
Are you going to make that ground symbol emit light? I think that would be a nice idea since below light is often sinister looking.