Darktiste Sketchbook

[darktiste]

I would suggest utilizing more brushes that have rougher texture, as some of the surface types are a bit too smooth (wood and rock surfaces, for example). The grass can use a bit more depiction of lighting, so we can see more form and shadow between patches and blades of grass, as well as other objects casting shadow onto the grass.

For the grass it intentional it similar to Ghibli scene . Also it heavily stylized i am not going for lot of noise it manga inspired.

For me the piece was not about good lighting or realism. It was about creating a coherent group of props in a scene something i don't generally do and probably won't do again because to me it getting to busy with background element i want the presentation to be clean and read as concept art right now it feel like i am going to far into illustration theory. Specially in the last two project i want to simplify and have a clean presentation .Right now there to much overlapping it doesn't read as concept art the object should be isolated from one and other it should look more like variety of item presented to an art director to approve not necessarily the same iteration on one props but multiple item to establish a theme.

Thank for the feed back.