07-24-2025, 09:41 PM
The wrapping of the hand around the sword look weak. The cloak look a little high. From the way the hair move it doesn't make sense how the cloak is. Right not it like it floating behind her instead of wrapping around the shoulder. I know for sure that the ear isn't that close to the horse eye as i studied a bit of animal anatomy as i was thinking of becoming a creature designer.
I would try to rework the foreground and try to get rid of that smoke otherwise it might end up looking very 2 dimensional because of how much thing align in space. One other advise going forward is maybe try to not go with all those extreme dynamic angle this way it gonna be easier to find reference and combine but it will also help you because drawing foreshorten for subject matter that is not familiar is increasing difficult and time consuming over time you get back to more dynamic artwork. That the down side of combining reference you have to do more study but the end result is just more dynamic because you don't get lock by the pose of those dynamic reference and you can add more to them then let say just add 10%.
I would try to rework the foreground and try to get rid of that smoke otherwise it might end up looking very 2 dimensional because of how much thing align in space. One other advise going forward is maybe try to not go with all those extreme dynamic angle this way it gonna be easier to find reference and combine but it will also help you because drawing foreshorten for subject matter that is not familiar is increasing difficult and time consuming over time you get back to more dynamic artwork. That the down side of combining reference you have to do more study but the end result is just more dynamic because you don't get lock by the pose of those dynamic reference and you can add more to them then let say just add 10%.