09-06-2025, 08:24 PM
The background look unresolved it more of a feeling than anything i can pin point i certainly understand the framing of the head achieve by that layout but it not convincing in term of arrangement that the closest i can put it in word.I would suggest a few more thumbnail for the background layout perhaps. For some reason i am also seeing a vision of a throne not in a palace but like in some kind of open air setting where column align just for aesthical purpose.
There also something about the gesture that seem off in term of balancing the weight (perhaps it just my inexperience in that realm and the cloth hiding the gesture).I feel like the left leg need to move more to the left to carry the twisting of the body and arm and head shifting to the left.
There also deformation on the ring chain some of the ring are flatten at the torn and chain do not ''stick together'' they interlock i never seen chain like those. Also i expect that your level to be doing more then coping ellipse without care for any form or perspective the chain is not resting flat on a cube like come on men it know it alot of work but that the price you pay for those design decision.
There also something about the gesture that seem off in term of balancing the weight (perhaps it just my inexperience in that realm and the cloth hiding the gesture).I feel like the left leg need to move more to the left to carry the twisting of the body and arm and head shifting to the left.
There also deformation on the ring chain some of the ring are flatten at the torn and chain do not ''stick together'' they interlock i never seen chain like those. Also i expect that your level to be doing more then coping ellipse without care for any form or perspective the chain is not resting flat on a cube like come on men it know it alot of work but that the price you pay for those design decision.