CGMythology's Sketchbook

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I think this piece is pretty weak the background leak storytelling.There is no connection between the figure and the horse apart from the figure sitting on it. The flag leak form/fold. There also a tangent with the horse head band and the flag just to name that one. Good on catch the horse mouth. For the flag i would try to re design something with more identity and not have the insignia so close to the pool.

I don't really understand the dagger importance i would prefer a companion in her hand something more worth looking at and worth interacting without this is just an unanimated object i really don't understand what that dagger bring in the storytelling. Also have the dagger toward herself that kind of strange. The direction it facing also i feel change the implied story to a degree when it point toward the castle i feel as if she will come back for revenge and when it toward herself well i really don't get it self harm?

I feel like the horse head is still to small. I am also not convince by the way she hold the flag the pole direction and how her body is doesn't make much sense it hard to explain but it come down to you don't hold a flag behind your back and the hand position cannot physically hold the flag in that position or it again an othe case of i need to pov to see for myself.

I really don't like when subject matter just vanish behind one and other where we loose the sense of it spacial direction for example where is the bottom of that flag pole?i Is it a short stick flag? That odd. Where is the horse lead vanishing into? How is she conducting the horse?That the problem when hand are not visible they hand hold alot of the story props which give function and realism to a story. By hiding the hand we loose some of that visual clarity.