CGMythology's Sketchbook

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The lightening effect doesn't need outline specially since you gone with a painterly style i would say Use a soft brush it light not a solid this for me create a break in the stylization choose do you have outline elsewhere?

You did a pretty good damn job on the metal but i am less convince by the fabric i feel it to ''flat'' in the gradient you have harsh transition.

The lateral muscle on the side of the torso they sit on the ribcage there is no need for a ''line'' running along but i suppose you made it so as a guide or ''rhythm'' just be careful not to carry it to the final .Those lateral muscle they also extend longer than that .For additional information A line is often the result of a compression that only occur either due to excess fat or extreme bending.Where there is chance for line to show with more definition it due to muscle group and muscle definition. But for such line to appear we are talking about compression not extension.

Also now the ''handle'' is way off center in it insertion into the hammer head the sketch was better on this topic.

So yeah i really wanna encourage you to do some insertion exercise basically you make tWo geometric form ''fuse'' into one an other. Specially ball and cylinder are tricky to do but also mix some cube and box and some pyramid in the mix.

Some of those exercise are also about finding the center of your object or ellipse.

One of those is about cutting and adding to shape.