03-03-2026, 12:52 AM
I feel the hand could still use more crease where the joint are.
The value are getting a lil more define but the bustier still leak the roundness that i would expect of something that wrap tightly around the body.
I am not sure if it the eye that need to be move or the mouth that out of perspective but a quick try to see what should be adjusted is a quick lasso tool or to use the liquify tool if you got that in your tool option it can help reshape some feature but you might need to redraw them if they are to out of perspective.
One other detail that kinda bother me is how much of the ear anatomy is missing to even call that a ear more reference of other work would be suggested or just more anatomy study to fill your visual library.
Also glass tend to deform what behind the glass because they might have slight curvature so when light pass it get bent so her cheek is behind the glass it can deform unless those glass are just for protection which i doubt.
For the pose i think it a bit hard to read what she gripping if the pose of the leg would have been work a lil more in the composition stage i think you would have achieve better read. So yeah i really wanna say that i feel if you want to put anything in your portfolio i think you really need to step up the pre work otherwise you really betting on a homerun on the first attempt and i think that kinda take years of work to achieve this kind of consistence.
Remember that you also have to be able to take a outside view on your work. You know the choose you made and what everything is in the scene but you cant assume the viewer will see thing as clearly as you do that why you want to exaggerate to a degree.
The value are getting a lil more define but the bustier still leak the roundness that i would expect of something that wrap tightly around the body.
I am not sure if it the eye that need to be move or the mouth that out of perspective but a quick try to see what should be adjusted is a quick lasso tool or to use the liquify tool if you got that in your tool option it can help reshape some feature but you might need to redraw them if they are to out of perspective.
One other detail that kinda bother me is how much of the ear anatomy is missing to even call that a ear more reference of other work would be suggested or just more anatomy study to fill your visual library.
Also glass tend to deform what behind the glass because they might have slight curvature so when light pass it get bent so her cheek is behind the glass it can deform unless those glass are just for protection which i doubt.
For the pose i think it a bit hard to read what she gripping if the pose of the leg would have been work a lil more in the composition stage i think you would have achieve better read. So yeah i really wanna say that i feel if you want to put anything in your portfolio i think you really need to step up the pre work otherwise you really betting on a homerun on the first attempt and i think that kinda take years of work to achieve this kind of consistence.
Remember that you also have to be able to take a outside view on your work. You know the choose you made and what everything is in the scene but you cant assume the viewer will see thing as clearly as you do that why you want to exaggerate to a degree.