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[hollinrake]

Your b/w portrait is definitely heading in the right direction for you and has some nice form to it. Lots of improvement too. The main thing I would suggest would be to focus on having sharper edges in your work (particularly in figures or still life). Perhaps block out your shapes initially and refine the edges so they're a little crisper, or work from a sketch that keeps things a little tidier. I think if you made the shapes more defined it'd really push you forward. Hope that helps, keep at it!