01-20-2013, 03:07 PM
Nice paintings!
Love your color pieces - that self portrait is very nice.
But here, looking at your sketches, seems youre holding the pencil very tightly, your lines are very stiff in result. This last thumbs in graphite are a step in the right direction!
A line in itself holds a lot of information, its much more than a simple line. It's the whole theory behind line quality and all that. So try to be gentler with your pencil, maybe even trying to hold it in a different way just to it's easier to slide the pencil on the paper surface. Let those lines flow :D Feel the paper you're drawing on through the pencil, you know?
Or maybe that's just me babbling :D Haha feel free to ignore me, some people hate feedback like this, so...
Anyway, good work! Keep it up!
Love your color pieces - that self portrait is very nice.
But here, looking at your sketches, seems youre holding the pencil very tightly, your lines are very stiff in result. This last thumbs in graphite are a step in the right direction!
A line in itself holds a lot of information, its much more than a simple line. It's the whole theory behind line quality and all that. So try to be gentler with your pencil, maybe even trying to hold it in a different way just to it's easier to slide the pencil on the paper surface. Let those lines flow :D Feel the paper you're drawing on through the pencil, you know?
Or maybe that's just me babbling :D Haha feel free to ignore me, some people hate feedback like this, so...
Anyway, good work! Keep it up!