Compositing critique please
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I think you should move the angle of the camera so the building is more in the third of the image and make it the focal point... now it seams like the bridge is the main thing in the image... Also, the tree is making a tangent with the top of the image... I would make it ether bigger and make it serve as a part of the frame and maybe bring it cloaser, or make it smaller so the hight fits in the image completely... Since you have a clear sky with clouds, you could make it so the ligh hits the building and hive it saturated colors and use the shadows of clouds (that you dont see in the image) to put stuff in the shadow... Like a vigneting effect... But yea, you should decide what is the main thing in the image and than try to make it most visible and make the rest bring the eye to it...
That is my humble opinion... Hope it helps! Keep going!!!

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Compositing critique please - by Jaywyr - 02-11-2013, 09:32 AM
RE: Compositing critique please - by IgorIv - 02-11-2013, 03:08 PM
RE: Compositing critique please - by Jaywyr - 02-11-2013, 08:04 PM
RE: Compositing critique please - by Camilleon - 02-14-2013, 02:59 PM
RE: Compositing critique please - by Jaywyr - 02-15-2013, 10:07 AM

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