The Aerialist - Critique Needed!

[Camilleon]

Hello again, so here we are with another work in the same series as Mr. Turtle ("The Room"). I would very much appreciate any feedback you can give! What works, what doesn't work, etc. Personally, I would have liked to use a vertical format instead of this wide horizontal one, but the reason I am using a horizontal one is because I hope to put this whole series online, each painting a full page--hence the widescreen format. I don't want a "lightbox" like the one I currently use in my portfolio gallery.