The Aerialist - Critique Needed!
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Ah, yes--I'm digging the partial shadow over her! Definitely makes it more dynamic like you said. I'll have to study my source photo some more--I think you're right in that top leg needs a wee bit more curvature, but now that I'm looking at it, I think the bottom leg might be a little too small/thin. I find the frame a little distracting--I'll have to mull that over. You do have a point about the font, though, I'm wondering if I can get it crisper if I add the text afterward in Indesign...

In any case--thank you so much for the feedback! Extremely helpful!

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The Aerialist - Critique Needed! - by Camilleon - 02-14-2013, 05:00 AM
RE: The Aerialist - Critique Needed! - by Camilleon - 02-15-2013, 06:51 AM
RE: The Aerialist - Critique Needed! - by Elmst - 02-21-2013, 12:57 AM

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