02-15-2013, 08:15 AM
(02-15-2013, 06:51 AM)Camilleon Wrote: I find the frame a little distracting--I'll have to mull that over.
In any case--thank you so much for the feedback! Extremely helpful!
No worries! Actually now I find that frame distracting as well...perhaps something more subtle. I guess I was trying to deal with the feeling that it just looked a tad bit "unfinished" in a way, but I'm not sure what you would want to do. Perhaps you could add a bit of custom interest to the typography itself, like larger first capital letters for the paragraphs or something like that; something that also reiterates the theme of the circus?