The Aerialist - Critique Needed!
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A big thanks to you both! I actually had the ring in the painting from the very beginning, but I had it in the bottom right-corner, covering about a third of the area beneath her. I tried a few different things with it, but hated the way everything looked, so I took it out! I like how both of you have it actually more centered in the composition and the complimentary color is a great idea. I definitely like the re-positioning of the text--it makes the composition considerably less awkward. I'll update again as soon as I've tweaked it some more. Thanks again!

P.S. The reason I don't have the author's name for the text is because I wrote it. :)

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The Aerialist - Critique Needed! - by Camilleon - 02-14-2013, 05:00 AM
RE: The Aerialist - Critique Needed! - by Elmst - 02-21-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: The Aerialist - Critique Needed! - by Camilleon - 02-21-2013, 02:18 AM

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